"This script is an entertaining piece full of mystery and discomfort. Every scene holds as much interest as the next. The best part is the lack of dialogue! This script would not be the same if words were added. In fact, dialogue would not work for this piece. Instead, your descriptions provide all the necessary information we need."
"Your descriptions of the characters’ lack of emotion are captivating and it feels like watching a train wreck – you cannot look away! We are so curious as to why they are acting as they do."
"The world building done in the first scene sets the perfect tone for this peace. The seemingly pleasant scene takes a turn for the worst almost immediately in a completely effective way. The mother calmly subduing her child with the yellow pills gives the audience a clear sense of the story."
"The scenes were deathly quiet, which gave off a delightfully eerie tone for the entirety of the script. While we never hear Angela utter a word, her character is fully developed and intriguing from the start. She comes off as a bright, shining force in a horrible world. The tension builds with her in every scene in an effective and scary way. At any moment she could be found out, or worse, she could give up and join the dull peace that the world shares."
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